[1st Division] Zanpaktou Hell Forge
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[1st Division] Zanpaktou Hell Forge
Here you will post your zanpaktou idea and wait for approval either by the Captain
or Vice Captain. Our final say will not be undermined by arguments. We are reasonable
but do not think we are soft. To forge your weapon please follow this:
Sealed State
Weapon Appearance:
Zanpaktou Spirit Appearance:
Inner World Appearance:
Zanpaktou Name:
Shikai
Release Command:
New Weapon Appearance:
Zanpaktou Element:
Abilities
Passive/Innate Ability #1-2:
Strength:
Weakness:
Active Ability #1-3:
Name:
Strength:
Weakness:
Bankai
Release Command:
New Weapon Appearance:
Zanpaktou Element/s:
Abilities
Passive/Innate Ability #1-2:
Strength:
Weakness:
Active Ability #1-3:
Name:
Strength:
Weakness:
Now just copy this:
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[size=18][b]Sealed State[/b][/size]
[b]Weapon Appearance:[/b]
[b]Zanpaktou Spirit Appearance:[/b]
[b]Inner World Appearance:[/b]
[size=18][u][b]Zanpaktou Name:[/b][/u][/size]
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[u][b]Shikai[/b][/u][/size]
[b]Release Command:[/b]
[b]New Weapon Appearance:[/b]
[b]Zanpaktou Element:[/b]
[u][b]Abilities[/b][/u]
[b]Passive/Innate Ability #1-2:[/b]
[u]Strength:[/u]
[u]Weakness:[/u]
[b]Active Ability #1-3:[/b]
[b]Name:[/b]
[u]Strength:[/u]
[u]Weakness:[/u]
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[u][b]Bankai[/b][/u][/size]
[b]Release Command:[/b]
[b]New Weapon Appearance:[/b]
[b]Zanpaktou Element/s:[/b]
[u][b]Abilities[/b][/u]
[b]Passive/Innate Ability #1-2:[/b]
[u]Strength:[/u]
[u]Weakness:[/u]
[b]Active Ability #1-3:[/b]
[b]Name:[/b]
[u]Strength:[/u]
[u]Weakness:[/u]
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Re: [1st Division] Zanpaktou Hell Forge
Sealed State
Weapon Appearance:
Zanpaktou Name:
Shikai: Itami
Bankai: Kodokuna Itami
Shikai
Release Command: Cry and Devour...
New Weapon Appearance:
Shikai 1
Abilities
Passive Ability #1:
Strength: The user can summon a hollow to help them.
Weakness: Only one hollow may be out at one time
Hollow is at Normal or Gillian rank
User is weakened for a small time afterwards
Passive Ability #2
Strength: The user is able to create a heirro wall in front of them to black an attack.
Weakness: The user may not use an active ability while using this.
Active Ability #1
Name: Hollow's Wrath
Strength: Thee user is able to copy the unique ability of any Hollow/Arrancar they encounter.
Weakness: They user may only copy one ability at a time.
Active Ability #2
Name: Cero/Bala
Strength: The user may charge a cero or fire bala at an opponent.
Weakness: Bala is weaker than cero
Ceros ften leave user tired for a small time afterward.
Active Ability #3
Name: Garganta
Strength: User can create Gargantas
Weakness: No weakness
Bankai
Release Command: Bankai!
New Weapon Appearance:
Zanpaktou Element/s: Hollow
Abilities
Passive #1
Strength: The user can summon hollows to their aid
Weakness: Only five Hollows can be summoned at once
Hollows are Gillian to Vasto Lorde
Only one Vasto Lorde may be summoned in the entire battle
User is fatigued for a bit after summon.
Innate Ability #1
Strength: All shikai active abilities can be used with no consequence.
Weakness: No weakness
Active Ability #1
Name: Cero Oscuras
Strength: Cero Oscuras can be fired from armor
Weakness: User is tired for a bit afterwards
Active ability #2
Name: Hollow's Fury
Strength: The user may copy the unique abilities of a Hollow/Arrancar. The user may now use any ability previously copied.
Weakness: No real weakness
Active Ability #3
Name: Cero Gigante
Strength: Fires off a Cero Gigante at opponent.
Weakness: User is extremely fatigued after use and will take long to recover.
Weapon Appearance:
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Zanpaktou Name:
Shikai: Itami
Bankai: Kodokuna Itami
Shikai
Release Command: Cry and Devour...
New Weapon Appearance:
Shikai 1
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Abilities
Passive Ability #1:
Strength: The user can summon a hollow to help them.
Weakness: Only one hollow may be out at one time
Hollow is at Normal or Gillian rank
User is weakened for a small time afterwards
Passive Ability #2
Strength: The user is able to create a heirro wall in front of them to black an attack.
Weakness: The user may not use an active ability while using this.
Active Ability #1
Name: Hollow's Wrath
Strength: Thee user is able to copy the unique ability of any Hollow/Arrancar they encounter.
Weakness: They user may only copy one ability at a time.
Active Ability #2
Name: Cero/Bala
Strength: The user may charge a cero or fire bala at an opponent.
Weakness: Bala is weaker than cero
Ceros ften leave user tired for a small time afterward.
Active Ability #3
Name: Garganta
Strength: User can create Gargantas
Weakness: No weakness
Bankai
Release Command: Bankai!
New Weapon Appearance:
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Zanpaktou Element/s: Hollow
Abilities
Passive #1
Strength: The user can summon hollows to their aid
Weakness: Only five Hollows can be summoned at once
Hollows are Gillian to Vasto Lorde
Only one Vasto Lorde may be summoned in the entire battle
User is fatigued for a bit after summon.
Innate Ability #1
Strength: All shikai active abilities can be used with no consequence.
Weakness: No weakness
Active Ability #1
Name: Cero Oscuras
Strength: Cero Oscuras can be fired from armor
Weakness: User is tired for a bit afterwards
Active ability #2
Name: Hollow's Fury
Strength: The user may copy the unique abilities of a Hollow/Arrancar. The user may now use any ability previously copied.
Weakness: No real weakness
Active Ability #3
Name: Cero Gigante
Strength: Fires off a Cero Gigante at opponent.
Weakness: User is extremely fatigued after use and will take long to recover.
Last edited by Hiatari on Thu Oct 18, 2012 9:07 am; edited 1 time in total
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Re: [1st Division] Zanpaktou Hell Forge
Wielder's Name: Eldridge
Zanpakutou's Name: Shikkyaku no Kaze
Zanpakutou Spirit: A young man with blonde hair.
Inner World: A large field that goes to infinity. Everywhere is grass with wind turbines on it.
Sealed Form Appearance: Standard length katana, dark blue hilt.
Zanpakutou Element: Wind
SHIKAI
Shikai Release Command: Blow Off
Shikai Appearance: Same with sealed appearance.
Wind Manupulation: It activates itself after Shikai is activated. The wielder can control the winds using very little reiatsu. It is not an attack but can be used offensively.
Weakness(es): It can cause problems to the wielder too due to the type of the ground (like sand)
Slaying Wind: This technique fires strong concussive and destructive blue colored energy blasts. The energy flows out of the blade in different shapes as it fires in the arc of the sword’s swing.
Weakness(es): This technique can be charged up and can produce more damage, but uses more Reiatsu.
Wind Shield: This technique creates a large wind-shaped blue barrier in front of the blade.
Weakness(es): It can only be created in front of the blade. It won’t affect the attacks coming from back.
Reducing Wind: This technique creates a large wind that flies very quickly towards the opponent. Upon contact with a target envelops the target with tornado-like intensity. After it is hit successfully, it reduces the reiatsu of the target and transfers it to the wielder. It is dangerous and can also be used to counter projectiles.
Weakness(es): It is the wielder’s most powerful Shikai technique. That’s why it uses more reiatsu than the other techniques.
Zanpakutou's Name: Shikkyaku no Kaze
Zanpakutou Spirit: A young man with blonde hair.
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Inner World: A large field that goes to infinity. Everywhere is grass with wind turbines on it.
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Sealed Form Appearance: Standard length katana, dark blue hilt.
- Spoiler:
Zanpakutou Element: Wind
SHIKAI
Shikai Release Command: Blow Off
Shikai Appearance: Same with sealed appearance.
Wind Manupulation: It activates itself after Shikai is activated. The wielder can control the winds using very little reiatsu. It is not an attack but can be used offensively.
Weakness(es): It can cause problems to the wielder too due to the type of the ground (like sand)
Slaying Wind: This technique fires strong concussive and destructive blue colored energy blasts. The energy flows out of the blade in different shapes as it fires in the arc of the sword’s swing.
Weakness(es): This technique can be charged up and can produce more damage, but uses more Reiatsu.
Wind Shield: This technique creates a large wind-shaped blue barrier in front of the blade.
Weakness(es): It can only be created in front of the blade. It won’t affect the attacks coming from back.
Reducing Wind: This technique creates a large wind that flies very quickly towards the opponent. Upon contact with a target envelops the target with tornado-like intensity. After it is hit successfully, it reduces the reiatsu of the target and transfers it to the wielder. It is dangerous and can also be used to counter projectiles.
Weakness(es): It is the wielder’s most powerful Shikai technique. That’s why it uses more reiatsu than the other techniques.
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Re: [1st Division] Zanpaktou Hell Forge
>< sorry i took a bit... was busy with RL... anywho...
Hiatari - i'm ok with your zanpakuto... except for the Vasto bit, no Vastos ok?... make sure your more fatigued, like with ability 3. So...with that said APPROVED
Eldridge - i see no issues so APPROVED
Hiatari - i'm ok with your zanpakuto... except for the Vasto bit, no Vastos ok?... make sure your more fatigued, like with ability 3. So...with that said APPROVED
Eldridge - i see no issues so APPROVED
Last edited by Tasapop on Thu Oct 18, 2012 8:45 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: [1st Division] Zanpaktou Hell Forge
Zanpakuto Profile
Zanpakuto Name: Kaen Toreitei (Flame Bird of Eternity)
Sealed Appearance:
The appearance of Kaen Toreitei is the same as a normal zanpakuto, the only difference is that it is slightly smaller than normal zanpakuto and the cross guard is slightly modified to resemble that of a rapier. The grip is red and silver and the pommel has a cross with two circles on either side of it, this is then colored black. The scabbard of the sword is black with a phoenix slightly below the chape.
Spirit Manifestation
Spirit Realm:
Shikai
Shikai Release: Die and Be Reborn
Shikai Appearance:
Overall Shikai Strength: The overall strength comes from the ability to cause 3rd degree burns to whoever it comes in contact with, even if it doesn't manage to cut them. One of its main methods of attacking without using the swords themselves is the fireballs that can be created using the reiatsu and aura around the blades.
Overall Shikai Weakness: Drake may also get burned by the blades, if they are used against him in battle.
Abilities:
Passive Ability #1: Ōrabāningu (Burning Aura)
Strengths Kaen releases an aura which ensnares the blades; the only one who doesn’t get hurt by this aura is the wielder of the blades. This is because the aura only envelops the actual blades and not the hilt or cross guard. Without getting close to the opponent to land an attack, if the aura touches the opponent whether it is slightly it will be able to burn them, this burn depends on the distance between the blade and the opponent the closer the sword was the more serious the burn.
Weakness Depending on the reiatsu of the wielder will depend on the strength and the limit of the aura. If not enough reiatsu is being used then only the tip of the swords will be covered by the aura, meaning stabs will be the only thing that will be able to burn the opponent.
Passive Ability #2 Konran-en (Disorienting Flames)
Strengths Heat is generated from both blades and Drake’s body, causing a heat wave to occur. The heat wave will then appear as a ring around Drake and the opponent, this heat will be limited to a 5-metre radius. The heat will disorient the sight of the opponent.
Weakness The disorientation is only slight and Drake will also be subject to it. Any flammable objects near the heat will be subject to it, and might also catch fire; this may lead to a battle within a flaming ring.
Active Ability #1: Fureimubādofurea (Flame Bird Flare)
Release Command Flames become my Blade, Steam become my Air, Fureimubādofurea
Strengths
When the release command is called out, a twister of fire encircles Drake for a few moments, acting like a shield. This will last for roughly 2 minutes depending on the rank of the user and his stamina. This attack is used mainly for defense and not offence.
Weakness Drake will only be able to see the flames and anything outside of the flames will be hard to make out. Since it will be hard to see the opponent Drake may have to rely on finding the opponent using their spirit ribbon or by following their reiatsu.
Active Ability #2: Ōraburasuto (Aura Blast)
Strengths Taking some aura off the sword and mixing it with his reiatsu, Drake can conjure fire balls in his hand, these can be used to attack the opponent if thrown. The amount of aura collected will depend on the size and distance of the ball.
Weakness This attack reduces the amount of aura around the blades, and he would have to have one out of his hand in order to use this technique. This also uses reiatsu, so this will also be drained.
Active Ability #3 Fureimubādosutoraiku (Flame Bird Strike)
Strengths Concentrating on them, Drake is able to shot a wave of fire using the edges of each the blades.
Weakness Anything that comes into contact with the wave of fire is immediately burned and may go up in flames, , if the blast isn't used carefully, also there is a limited amount of uses of this move depending on the level of the user.
Zanpakuto Name: Kaen Toreitei (Flame Bird of Eternity)
Sealed Appearance:
The appearance of Kaen Toreitei is the same as a normal zanpakuto, the only difference is that it is slightly smaller than normal zanpakuto and the cross guard is slightly modified to resemble that of a rapier. The grip is red and silver and the pommel has a cross with two circles on either side of it, this is then colored black. The scabbard of the sword is black with a phoenix slightly below the chape.
Spirit Manifestation
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Spirit Realm:
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Shikai
Shikai Release: Die and Be Reborn
Shikai Appearance:
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Overall Shikai Strength: The overall strength comes from the ability to cause 3rd degree burns to whoever it comes in contact with, even if it doesn't manage to cut them. One of its main methods of attacking without using the swords themselves is the fireballs that can be created using the reiatsu and aura around the blades.
Overall Shikai Weakness: Drake may also get burned by the blades, if they are used against him in battle.
Abilities:
Passive Ability #1: Ōrabāningu (Burning Aura)
Strengths Kaen releases an aura which ensnares the blades; the only one who doesn’t get hurt by this aura is the wielder of the blades. This is because the aura only envelops the actual blades and not the hilt or cross guard. Without getting close to the opponent to land an attack, if the aura touches the opponent whether it is slightly it will be able to burn them, this burn depends on the distance between the blade and the opponent the closer the sword was the more serious the burn.
Weakness Depending on the reiatsu of the wielder will depend on the strength and the limit of the aura. If not enough reiatsu is being used then only the tip of the swords will be covered by the aura, meaning stabs will be the only thing that will be able to burn the opponent.
Passive Ability #2 Konran-en (Disorienting Flames)
Strengths Heat is generated from both blades and Drake’s body, causing a heat wave to occur. The heat wave will then appear as a ring around Drake and the opponent, this heat will be limited to a 5-metre radius. The heat will disorient the sight of the opponent.
Weakness The disorientation is only slight and Drake will also be subject to it. Any flammable objects near the heat will be subject to it, and might also catch fire; this may lead to a battle within a flaming ring.
Active Ability #1: Fureimubādofurea (Flame Bird Flare)
Release Command Flames become my Blade, Steam become my Air, Fureimubādofurea
Strengths
When the release command is called out, a twister of fire encircles Drake for a few moments, acting like a shield. This will last for roughly 2 minutes depending on the rank of the user and his stamina. This attack is used mainly for defense and not offence.
Weakness Drake will only be able to see the flames and anything outside of the flames will be hard to make out. Since it will be hard to see the opponent Drake may have to rely on finding the opponent using their spirit ribbon or by following their reiatsu.
Active Ability #2: Ōraburasuto (Aura Blast)
Strengths Taking some aura off the sword and mixing it with his reiatsu, Drake can conjure fire balls in his hand, these can be used to attack the opponent if thrown. The amount of aura collected will depend on the size and distance of the ball.
Weakness This attack reduces the amount of aura around the blades, and he would have to have one out of his hand in order to use this technique. This also uses reiatsu, so this will also be drained.
Active Ability #3 Fureimubādosutoraiku (Flame Bird Strike)
Strengths Concentrating on them, Drake is able to shot a wave of fire using the edges of each the blades.
Weakness Anything that comes into contact with the wave of fire is immediately burned and may go up in flames, , if the blast isn't used carefully, also there is a limited amount of uses of this move depending on the level of the user.
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Re: [1st Division] Zanpaktou Hell Forge
Sealed State
Weapon Appearance:
A basic Katana with a skull on the hilt.
Zanpaktou Spirit Appearance:
Inner World Appearance:
Zanpaktou Name:
Kami no maisō
Shikai
Release Command:
Burn the sun Kami no maisō!
New Weapon Appearance:
The zanouktou melts and covers Grave’s body in a weightless armour and covers his fists and feet in a thick layer of Lutetium, lava seems to course through the armour as if had veins. The only part of Grave that can be seen from the armour is his eyes.
Zanpaktou Element:
Lava
Abilities
Passive/Innate Ability #1-2:
Strength:
Passive Ability 1:
Grave's armoured form greatly increases his defense.
Passive Ability 2:
The Lutetium covering his hands and feet greatly heighten the force and weight of his blows, and as the armor is weightless it does not affect his speed or ability to move around.
Weakness:
Large masses of water makes the lava harden, and just when metal is hardened quickly it breaks easily from heavy blows.
While the material of his shikai is weightless and does not affect his ability to move, it does reduce his ability to duck and dodge point blank blows (such as kicks or punches) although he can block most attacks, it's dangerous when going against a blade and he usually has to resort to cheap tricks or Shunpo.
Active Ability #1-3:
Name:
Erupting volcano - 噴火する火山 (Funka suru kazan)
Strength:
Grave slams his fist into the ground and depending on his anger uses a large amount of Reiatsu to make the ground erupt around him spewing out lava to burn and a shockwave that can knock back or even injure enemies. (The more angry Grave is the larger the concussive force and the more Reiatsu he uses.)
Weakness:
Shunpo can avoid the lava and a powerful water ability could slow or even halt the water (but not the shockwave)
[b]Name:
追い撃 Final blow.
Strength:
A single punch or kick where Grave wraps his leg or hand in Lava and kicks or punche his opponent with a massive amount of force.
Weakness:[b]
Uses a medium amount of reiatsu and can't be sustained for long as the heat can hurt Grave after awhile.
Shunpo.
Weapon Appearance:
A basic Katana with a skull on the hilt.
Zanpaktou Spirit Appearance:
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Inner World Appearance:
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Zanpaktou Name:
Kami no maisō
Shikai
Release Command:
Burn the sun Kami no maisō!
New Weapon Appearance:
The zanouktou melts and covers Grave’s body in a weightless armour and covers his fists and feet in a thick layer of Lutetium, lava seems to course through the armour as if had veins. The only part of Grave that can be seen from the armour is his eyes.
Zanpaktou Element:
Lava
Abilities
Passive/Innate Ability #1-2:
Strength:
Passive Ability 1:
Grave's armoured form greatly increases his defense.
Passive Ability 2:
The Lutetium covering his hands and feet greatly heighten the force and weight of his blows, and as the armor is weightless it does not affect his speed or ability to move around.
Weakness:
Large masses of water makes the lava harden, and just when metal is hardened quickly it breaks easily from heavy blows.
While the material of his shikai is weightless and does not affect his ability to move, it does reduce his ability to duck and dodge point blank blows (such as kicks or punches) although he can block most attacks, it's dangerous when going against a blade and he usually has to resort to cheap tricks or Shunpo.
Active Ability #1-3:
Name:
Erupting volcano - 噴火する火山 (Funka suru kazan)
Strength:
Grave slams his fist into the ground and depending on his anger uses a large amount of Reiatsu to make the ground erupt around him spewing out lava to burn and a shockwave that can knock back or even injure enemies. (The more angry Grave is the larger the concussive force and the more Reiatsu he uses.)
Weakness:
Shunpo can avoid the lava and a powerful water ability could slow or even halt the water (but not the shockwave)
[b]Name:
追い撃 Final blow.
Strength:
A single punch or kick where Grave wraps his leg or hand in Lava and kicks or punche his opponent with a massive amount of force.
Weakness:[b]
Uses a medium amount of reiatsu and can't be sustained for long as the heat can hurt Grave after awhile.
Shunpo.
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Re: [1st Division] Zanpaktou Hell Forge
Drake - i see no problems with your Zanpakuto so ...APPROVED
God of War - same with you ^^ APPROVED
God of War - same with you ^^ APPROVED
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